Bass?
The bass was probably the thing I liked most about this piece. The intro, starting at 0:12 when the bass lead comes, is when the piece actually started for me. I wasn't a huge fan of the drums or beginning bass.
I liked the...not sure what you'd call it at the end, around 1:04..Arpeggio? I think it fits well as a trance song, yet..it lacks the trance feel. When I think of trance I think of somewhat ambient pads played being covered and supporting the smooth leads with a drum beat that's a bit faster and holds my attention.
Definitely not bad for a WIP though, and has potential. I can definitely see this working as BiviZ said, for flash games and what not. Just finish up the end with the arpeggio. Right now it's a little awkward.
8/10
5/5